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First, Amazon adult filtered/dungeoned Seeding the Brat (making it difficult to find unless you know where to look). Now Kobo, on a rampage to protect adult readers from debasing themselves by reading pseudo-incest, banned it. WTF? They threatened authors with the removal of all their books unless they took down their incest/pseudo-incest titles. But…but…it’s fiction, right? Fantasy? The mind boggles.

KC Cave - Seeding the Brat jpeg largeHannah was wealthy after her rich parents drowned on their swingers cruise. All the money in the world, though, couldn’t do anything about the brat’s raging hormones and her overwhelming urge to procreate. So the 18-year-old beauty set her sights on Angus, the recent college grad she grew up with and who was now the man of the house, the sprawling Victorian mansion where they were raised. (And, no, they’re not related. But if they were, so what? It’s fiction.)

One problem: Hannah’s never gone all the way, unless you count the recent fumbling by high school football star Biff Baxter in the backseat of his ’68 GTO (he dropped the ball at goal to go, and Hannah had to take things into her own hands). That fiasco behind her, she learned a lot about the male of the species as she huddled in her secret hiding place and watched the well-endowed Angus pleasure himself in the most innovative ways. The sight, sounds and smells of him coming to climax after climax over the summer gave the brat an idea that would right a wrong (Angus was gypped out of his inheritance) and satisfy her lust. But for the plan to work, Hannah must convince Angus it was his idea to seed the brat. [brat, masturbation, MF erotica, explicit erotica, mutual masturbation, taboo erotica, humorous erotica, virgin]

E-Read Erotica Reviews: The book finds its voice early, and it feels like comfortable writing. You know it when you reads it, the writer just takes you on a sight-filled trip, doesn’t feel obligated to explain everything, and skips along in time over the most important points until it settles down for the main event. There’s enough detail in each to make you feel like you know each place and character, but not enough that you feel wallowed down in minutia. The sex scenes even stop when they serve their point. Oh my, a writer actually in control of the beast? Very nice work, patience, and control shown here. Give yourself a gold star.

Excerpt:

“What’s it feel like? I mean, a hard on?”

“Like a hunk of heavy wood, oak maybe,” he said, hefting his dick. “Just before I come, it’s like a piece of iron pipe, heavy and full.”

“And your balls?”

“Not as sensitive. But I get this dull ache, hard to describe, if I hold off ejaculating. Doesn’t sound good, but it feels, I don’t know, awesome. The ache goes away when I spurt.”

“But you’re not close to coming now, are you?”

“No, but it won’t take much. I’ve never done anything like this with a girl.”

“With a guy?”

“Yeah, when I was younger. Just fooling around.”

Angus sat down, still stroking himself. “Your turn.”

She pushed her jeans down and pulled her legs up on the couch, facing him.

“I usually wear a thong.”

“You’re forgiven.”

“I guess you’re experienced and know about girls.”

“Some. I’ve shown you mine. Now show me yours.”

Hannah gently pulled her outer labia apart. “Outer labia, here’s the inner. Uh, the hole’s down here…” Hannah realized she didn’t know her own anatomy very well.

“Just touch yourself. I’ll watch.”

They sat on the couch facing each other, their legs intertwined, and masturbated. First base, Hannah thought to herself. God, this is so much better than being scrunched in the closet.

Word count: 8,858

Price: $2.99

Available from: Amazon, Amazon UK, CarnaltopiaSmashwords, Barnes & Nobl

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